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(Contains: nudity, sexual themes, strong language and ideologically sensitive material)
WARNING !!! This text contains Extreme adult material. You have been warned, if adult content offends you, READ NO FURTHER !!

All particpants are 18 or older.


Original line art and colors by :iconsean-loco-odonnell:

UltraViolet is property of :iconeludajae: and appears with her permission

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Andrea Steele, formerly known as the heroine Freedom Star stood in front of the large mirror as her Mistress dressed her in the new costume. Holding her long blonde hair up and out of the way, she watched as Ultraviolet added the final piece of the ensemble. Ultraviolet smiled as her fingers closed the collar around Andrea’s neck. The two-inch wide strap of material fastened together in the back almost seamlessly; the unstable molecules the fabric was comprised of allowed the ends to fuse together on an atomic level. The front of the collar was decorated with a star-shaped emblem colored a bright metallic violet. As the villainess watched in the mirror, the former heroine started to lower her hands to let her blonde tresses fall.

“No, keep your hands up, and watch the collar, pet” commanded the villainess.

As both women looked on, the unique molecules of the outfit began to absorb the peculiar energy the ex-heroine’s body emitted at all times. The black fabric of the collar, G-string, and bra all began to shift color to a slightly glowing fuchsia. The various star emblems decorating the collar, belt, and straps all began to change from violet to a more pinkish hue.

“The higher your energy level, the more the colors will change and glow. Do you like it?” asked the purple haired woman. She leaned closer, kissing the nape of her newest acquisition’s neck as her hands trailed down Andrea’s body. Her slender fingers ran over her pet’s warm skin, tracing the curves of her full breasts barely restrained by the skimpy top the villain had provided. Her fingers continued on, down over the flat stomach and finally resting on the swell of her pet’s hips.

“Yes Mistress,” moaned the defeated heroine as her body shuddered with the pleasure of her Mistress’s touch. “It feels so good against my skin!”

“Yes, and it will feel even better the more you use your powers, little one,” replied Violet. The villain’s statement was not hyperbole. The inside surfaces of the top and g-string had been coated with a second layer of unstable molecules. Unlike those comprising the outer layer, these molecules were molded into a collection of ridges and protrusions inside the pieces of clothing. As they began to absorb the cosmic energy Freedom Star’s body was radiating, they began to squirm and vibrate. The voluptuous blonde moaned as thousands of tiny fingers began to massage her breasts and sex. Violet leaned forward to press her breasts into Andrea’s bare back and whispered “see how much I love you? I want you to feel all the pleasure that was denied to you before.” Grasping the straps of the g-string bottom, the villain pulled them tighter so the panel of the panties would dig into the blonde’s sex even more snugly.

Andrea closed her eyes and moaned. Her new costume did indeed feel so good. Concentrating, she raised her internal energy levels a bit and felt the sensation grow increasingly more pleasurable as the glow surrounding her got brighter.

“That’s it pet. You will shine like a star, but it will be a dark star. They called you Freedom, but gave you the opposite; told you to behave, to fight your nature, to pretend to be pure and good. I have given you real freedom, freedom to revel in the darkness inside you, freedom to satisfy your dark urges and desires. Freedom Star is dead! Tell me who you are now,” UltraViolet commanded.

Andrea looked in the mirror and admired her new costume. The small pieces of fabric did little to hide her body’s charms; and the colors proclaimed her allegiance to her new Mistress for all to see. A wicked smile curved her pouty lips as she said, “Dark Star, Mistress. My real name is Dark Star.” As she spoke, her blue eyes began to change tint and glow with a violet glow.

Violet smiled triumphantly. It was easy for her to feel how eagerly Andrea’s psyche had absorbed and accepted the changes the villain had created inside the former heroine’s mind. Using her hands, she turned Dark Star’s hips and rotated her pet until they were face to face. UltraViolet felt her bosom press against Dark Star’s ample breasts. She could feel the hard nubs of her new slave’s stimulated nipples trying to poke through the fabric covering them. Her hands shifted to cup the blonde woman’s ass cheeks and knead them as she pulled her closer possessively. “You belong to me, never forget that slave!” she whispered intensely as she kissed Dark Star with unbridled passion.

Dark Star felt her body grow even warmer as her lust for her Mistress grew from a fire into an inferno. She sucked on the villain’s tongue as it invaded her mouth, dueling with her own. Ultraviolet pushed her right leg between Dark Star’s thighs and smiled as she felt her pet obediently part her thighs to allow her Mistress access. The lust-drunk blonde moaned as she began to squirm, humping against Violet’s thigh like an animal in heat. The villainess could feel the heat of Dark Star’s sex through the fabric of her own costume. She continued to pillage her slave’s mouth with her kisses for several more minutes before finally stepping back.

Dark Star sounded a tiny moan of disappointment as she felt her Mistress step away. She wanted nothing more at that moment than to feel her Mistress’s lips against her, to savor the touch of her body against her own. With her eyes lowered respectfully, she dared to ask,”Mistress, may I … thank you… properly?” as she licked her lips hungrily.

UltraViolet smiled. “Do you think you have earned that privilege so soon, pet?” she teased the desperate woman.

;Please Mistress, I just wanted to show you how much I …”

“Shhh.. little pet,” Violet said softly as she pressed her finger against Star’s lips to stop her. “Since this is your birthday of sorts, I allow you the honor of doing as you wish. But this privilege is one that must be earned in the future, do you understand?”

“Oh yes Mistress, thank you, thank you so much!” she replied with tears of gratitude in her eyes. Dark Star began to step closer and reach out when Violet held up her palm.

“No slave, hands behind your back. Show me how skilled you are. Pretend I am your old cheerleading coach. How did she teach you to do this?”

Dark Star smiled as she realized what her Mistress wanted. Clasping her hands behind her back, her top stretched tightly over her full breasts, she leaned forward and caught the tab of the fastener for UltraViolet’s costume between her teeth. Pulling softly and smoothly, she slowly tugged the fastener down from her Mistress’s neck and between her breasts. Andrea’s head swam with lust and desire as the scent of Violet’s perfume filled her nose. The soft mounds of her Mistress’s breasts caressed her face as she began to kneel, pulling the fastener lower and lower. The tight fabric of the arch-villain’s costume began to curl back on its own as the fastener continued its downward travel. Violet reached up and pushed her costume off her shoulder to allow it to open further as Dark Star’s efforts continued.

On her knees, Dark Star’s head was now between her Mistress’s thighs as finished pulling the fastener all the way down. In front of her, UltraViolet’s most intimate treasure was revealed to her for the first time. The delicate folds swelling with anticipation, the barest hint of dewy moisture visible. The villainess’s pubic bush was carefully trimmed into a V shape above the opening to her sex, the purple hairs matching the color of the hair on her head. Dark Star gasped with hungry lust, licking her lips as she trembled with desire. She felt Violet tap her softly on her top of the head.

“That pussy isn’t going to eat itself, slave. Don’t keep your Mistress waiting,” Violet commanded. She moaned as Dark Star leaned forward and began to demonstrate what countless hours of practice in her youth had taught her. UltraViolet closed her eyes and savored the sensations as her new slave knelt in front of her, proving her devotion to her new mistress.
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:iconkjj42:
kjj42 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
You are a good writer.
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papalabas Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very alluring
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DrakaRC Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
Very sexy! I like this a lot.
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Dendory Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2009   Digital Artist
Great story! The dark side is truly a marvelous place!
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2009
Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it! :)
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Dendory Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2009   Digital Artist
Hope to see more soon ;)
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Speedslide Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
Et voila! Power perversion potential at it's finest! Excellent prose, madame. Works very well with the picture. Erotic, yet a good read for those looking deeper into story structure as well. A+, pal! ^^

I'm getting more and more curious to this whole Falling Star business...
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
Thank you sir! :thanks: Sean's great picture really inspired me.
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:iconmr-marcus-81:
Mr-Marcus-81 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa!!! :omg: :omfg: :horny: :faint: I think I need a cold shower now after reading that! :omg: Very sexy! :D

So, is it now officially canon that Freedom Star is now Dark Star?
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed the text along with the picture. It feels good to finally contribute something to the party.

And yes, Freedom Star is now Dark Star.
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:iconmr-marcus-81:
Mr-Marcus-81 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome...definitely a steamy read there! :omg: :horny: I hope to see some more sexy stories in the future from you! :D

And cool about Freedom now being Dark Star...I liked how you made the transition very smooth and it didn't seem forced to make her a villain. Plus, she's much hotter now! :love:
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
Thank you very much. The transition went smoothly when Eludajae's character was added to the mix.

I would like to write some more short stories to go along with the art I have commissioned.
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:iconmr-marcus-81:
Mr-Marcus-81 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome...it looks like Ultraviolet has been making quite some impact since she's been on the scene!

And I would love to see some more of your short stories to go along with the stuff that you've commissioned! :horny:
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
Thank you, I hope to be writing more in the future.
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:iconmr-marcus-81:
Mr-Marcus-81 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome...look forward to seeing more! :D
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
I am currently looking over your characters as I would love to do a collaboration with your great characters and mine in some way.
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:iconcheskamouse:
CheskaMouse Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
:excited: Ok.. can't wait for more!

I really need to get some of my old Super's from RPg's written down again... and Drawn!!!
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
Thank you very much. And I would love to see them when you do.
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:iconcheskamouse:
CheskaMouse Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
Thank you, Hey..You work with a lot of artist, who would you recomend to a low income mouse?
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
Wow, thanks for the trust in me. I'll note you, ok?
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:iconcheskamouse:
CheskaMouse Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
Thanks and good list. :boogie:
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Horacus Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Now that is sexy. Exelent work.
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Thank you very much. The artwork was 100% perfect, thanks to Sean's amazing work. It was easy to write some text to accompany it since the picture was so great. Thank you for the comment and for looking.
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Horacus Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
The fall of a hero is always great, and well, this scene is also fantastic.
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it! :D
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:iconhoracus:
Horacus Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
No, thank you for posting it.
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:iconhotrod5:
hotrod5 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome to the darkside, Dark Star. :evillaugh:

This is some hot writing, Teri. It really explains and adds the image.
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Thank you Dwight.
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DeadDog2007 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AS HOT AS A PIECE CAN GET WITHOUT NUDITY!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVING IT TO NO END!!!!
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Sean really did a great job crafting a very erotic picture. Thank you for looking.
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DeadDog2007 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yw
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Griffinsummoner Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
This is absolutely amazing. Your style of writing is enthralling, and I can't wait to experience more of it in the future.
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TerrylovesBoobs Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Gorgeous! Lovely story too... Such an improvement! Where did you get the idea from?
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
Thank you, it has been in planning for years actually, as the character developed
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TerrylovesBoobs Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
Years? That must be why your writing is so good! Mine just sort of bursts out all at once...
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
Oh, I tend to write spur of the moment, but the character arc was conceived a couple of years ago for roleplaying purposes.
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TerrylovesBoobs Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
Oh I see, you like all the roleplay stuff like Exgemini. He offered to let me join in after I've sorted out my pesky exams...
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
I actually suspected this to a certain extent...

although not being familiar with Freedom Star's backstory, I assumed a sexuality rewrite would have been needed for this to happen.
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Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
I didn't try to hide it, lol. I hope it didn't disappoint you.
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Soviet-Superwoman Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Once again, the image is beyond sensual and the prose is very convincing, well-written and erotic.
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Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Thank you very much Chris. :hug:
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Soviet-Superwoman Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Not at all, it's all well-deserved. :clap:
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:iconeludajae:
Eludajae Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
That was a wonderful surprise Teri :)

I have to agree with the Professor on this one...incendiary is a perfect description for this. Amazingly written and the image is wonderful !

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IC: Good slave, now you're not quiet done yet...
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U1trawoman Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
The Ice Woman thaws!

This is a very sensual read! Not only is it erotic, but it gives excellent insight to Freedom (Dark) Star.

I am going out of character a moment so I can point out that, Teri has the most complex and meticulously developed characters I have ever played against. I've known her for ****years, and the back story you are getting today is based on how the character developed in her genesis. There is no better player, writer or friend than Teri. She always moves forward, and is always true to her character's personality.

I assure you she is JUST getting started here, and her best is yet to come.

Now back in character: "I...am...going to rip...Freedom Star's head....off of her body when our paths cross!!! :rage:
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:iconeludajae:
Eludajae Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
"Oh you're going to damage your Mistress' property are you my Slave? Well I think there is a correction coming your way soon."

*picks up a very specific toy*

"Come hither my Slave we have much to...discuss."

*Grabs Ultrawomans new collar. Pulling her to her*
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U1trawoman Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes my Mistress. As you command.
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:iconeludajae:
Eludajae Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
Good Girl :devilish:
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:iconteri-minx:
Teri-Minx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Given Ultra and Dark Star's past history, I am curious see how that dynamic will work, lol.
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:iconeludajae:
Eludajae Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Oh this is going to be a roller coaster ride and there will be much screaming, smiling and cussing by the time we three are done :lmao: :)

~Ludy
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brad328 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Wow, the only thing that surpassed Sean's work on this, was your writing. A really gripping tale Teri, great job!
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